Gregory Weir (feveredwritings) wrote,
Gregory Weir
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TASOAE: 61

Originally published at Ludus Novus. Please leave any comments there.

I make an all-too-easy mistake in this comic. It doesn’t make any sense that Brynne is surprised by Cassie’s spider legs. Just because the reader can’t see them doesn’t mean Brynne can’t, and it’s hard to believe that she’d miss it. I should have put Cassie in the bathroom or behind a closed door or something.

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